Together In Hermitage (A Love Poem)

(French translation by Mr. Roland Leblanc, below)

Together In Hermitage (A Love Poem)

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I thought I'd be forlorn,

Forever on my own.

Suffering alone and misunderstood,

Enduring pains only few could.

I've been too dead inside,

Too ruthless and relentless.

But you reminded me of my heart,

Engulfed in an imperial fiery start.

I focused too much on revenge,

Working days on for my relevance.

But I missed the person in front of me,

The one who finally made me, happy.

You've endured me profoundly,

Following my lead heartfully.

You've lightened up my abyss,

Filled my grim void, with bliss.

I've dreamed of hermitage,

Living distant in the edge.

Thought I must do it alone,

For love's deadly sting, was shown.

But secretly I missed the depth,

Of feeling so alive again.

But what such thing is truly worth,

If experienced only alone?

Lonerhood is universal only,

Only by its default.

Wanting to feel seen by your company,

It is my most cherished fault.

Hopefully never alone again.

Never having to suffer so much pain.

Both for me and for you.

Let us claim our truth.

Together we will rule,

A vision towards a better world.

Where people are happier and cool.

Insights our words will, behold.

People don't have to suffer,

So much unnecessarily.

Many of you can smile.

Smile very genuinely.

Alex Mos' Feedback

Thank you for this beautiful and honest love poem, Mr. Tomasio. It speaks volumes to my heart and powers my mind with joy.

True love is real when two minds fit together like yin and yang puzzle pieces, cherish each other's authenticity, strive for self-improvement, and wish for eternal recurrence at the end of their lives.

I want to elaborate on the word "honesty". Like you, your verses are authentic and free from the standard of normative expectations.

Unlike "narcissistic" words written to be prized for their skillful uniformity with societal conventions, your poems are honest expressions from your heart.

In the era of fakeness, like "AI poetry," which can evoke any emotion on demand, I greatly appreciate the exciting uniqueness of your mind I fell in love with, which can be mimicked but never matched by another human or a technological tool.